My first comic

[Bumperdog]

I have always wanted to make a comic and out of a spark of justice I just straight went to drawing on paper and making a entire 1# issue comic.

The comic in question is a fanmade webcomic based of the famous video game franchise, Sonic the Hedgehog. I decided to make a fanmade story telling of it because in some sense I like Sonic and the world and characters and I think if I'm gonna start somewhere I might just do it based off a existing property so it gains some automatic repetition.

The comic can be found at my website on this page: https://bumperdog.neocities.org/comic/sonic

Let me know what you think about it, keep in mind your not gonna get a perfect or amazing artwork that is in levels of the official Sonic comics that Sega licenses as I don't really have any experience with drawing characters such as Sonic characters.

I would like to receive any criticism as possible or advice on what I should approve on. Anyways, thanks for reading!

[foxmosis]

Fun read!  I want to point out something that you are doing right and that is good job on having the character's entire body in a majority of the panels.  Like a waist up or talking head panel is absolutely fine!  But it's really easy to make most of the panels from the waist up without even noticing it.  Having the character's full body in the panel usually leads to it being more visually interesting.  It's a pitfall I usually see new comic artists fall into so again, good job on having a grasp of that!

[TheFrugalGamer]

This is really great! I love the way you've arranged all the panels + the backgrounds of the page. It's really engaging and creative, and keeps the reader following everything across the page. Whenever I've done comics, it's just usually plain boxes stacked next to each other boringly, lol.