Wattpad story! ~ Unseen/Eternal (YOU get to choose where the story goes!)

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[serenibee]

I’m writing a story on Wattpad right now and I’m gonna have the readers choose what happens next! 

Synopsis:

Twenty-Five People get kidnapped by a mysterious organization and forced into a death game.  Will any of them survive the perils and secrets this game holds?




Here’s the link if you would like to read! Link

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[invader_gvim]

I’m writing a story on Wattpad right now and I’m gonna have the readers choose what happens next! 

Synopsis:

Twenty-Five People get kidnapped by a mysterious organization and forced into a death game.  Will any of them survive the perils and secrets this game holds?




Here’s the link if you would like to read! Link

Your story is very blunt and I like the silly tone of it. It reminds me of an anime like Sergeant Frog, which I am fond of. I read it very quickly despite it not being an overly short wattpad chapter. That means your prose is tight! You should keep writing because I wanted to keep reading and discovered there was only the one chapter. I liked Griffin. I feel like this story has a lot of potential for dark comedy or something else in that genre.  I am reminded of that episode of Doctor Who where they are in an alien game show, as well as the Jimmy Neutron episode.

I personally think that it would be a lot cooler if you put your story on your very nice looking website rather than linking to wattpad. There is something about that which bothers me, but maybe I'm in the wrong for being bothered. Who knows?

My stories are put on my website because it feels more fun to me. I like that its not social media. I consciously choose to link them here as an example. Is that advertisement? I don't think so, but maybe it is. Maybe I'm a big ol hypocrite.

Either way your post feels like an ad to me and that is what bothers me.

If you need help for getting large blocks of text on a page without having to care much about the html I can help with that, but from the looks of your website your skills have far surpassed mine.