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« on: December 15, 2022 @627.63 »

This is the somewhat-finished product of my blog! Please give me constructive criticism and/or suggestions for my webpage. https://dotmidi.neocities.org/Home-Page/blog.html
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« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2022 @568.45 »

Yooo love the graphics & the fonts & how you designed the page overall - feels very cozy! My only nitpick is that the first post is kind of hard to read because of poor contrast between the dark-green text color and the red background (read more: https://colorkit.c:ha:contrast-checker/184233-cf1b24cc/). Otherwise, it looks great. Also, another dd/mm/yyyy user! Yay! :smile: :ozwomp:
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« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2022 @604.77 »

Yooo love the graphics & the fonts & how you designed the page overall - feels very cozy! My only nitpick is that the first post is kind of hard to read because of poor contrast between the dark-green text color and the red background (read more: https://colorkit.c:ha:contrast-checker/184233-cf1b24cc/). Otherwise, it looks great. Also, another dd/mm/yyyy user! Yay! :smile: :ozwomp:
Thank you! I really like the color palette on the normal posts, I'm sorry its hard to read for the christmasy one I'm trying to find a good red-green color combo >_< maybe ill just do red-white!
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« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2022 @821.63 »

i love the background and the stamp detail! the only thing i can think to add is a link back to your home page.

EDIT: i just went to your site from the index and noticed that it uses frames so the navigation sidebar is always there! my suggestion is totally unnecessary! :drat:

but seeing in that context gave me another suggestion. with the sidebar added, the stamp in the upper right gets almost totally cut off on my (kind of small) laptop screen. if you want, you could scoot it to the left a bit or set its position relative to the window size. i looked at your code and you could do that pretty easily by removing the width from this:


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#all{
width: 1100px;
position: relative;
left: 0%;
}

the header and the blog posts would stay in the same spot, but the stamp and the marquee would start on the right edge of the page, no matter what size it is. i like making pages responsive because i use a lot of different sized screens (and because i think it's fun to resize windows and watch everything move around), but it's your site and it's fine to keep things stationary if you prefer them that way! :grin:
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