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« on: February 12, 2025 @877.48 »

Let me go first. This is a small project I made: Swatch Clock
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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2025 @120.20 »

Your clock is really good, the information blurb at the top-left is helpful if someone hasn't heard of Swatch time before, and the whole page looks concise and easy to read with links to your main page if people are interested in exploring that.

My website is https://gizmoswebsite.neocities.org/. I've been working on it for the past few months, but I only put it online tonight. It's sort of an anonymous journal-blog where I post whatever is on my mind as well as reviews of media I've been consuming.
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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2025 @640.53 »

Have at it: https://vanitas-vanitatum-omnia-vanitas.net/

Let me go first. This is a small project I made: Swatch Clock

It's so straightforwardly and simply a clock, I have no idea what to say about it! 100/100 at creating a clock, I suppose.




My website is https://gizmoswebsite.neocities.org/. I've been working on it for the past few months, but I only put it online tonight. It's sort of an anonymous journal-blog where I post whatever is on my mind as well as reviews of media I've been consuming.


It's very barebones. It's not to my taste but I can't say there's anything wrong with it either. I feel like whatever you were going for, you managed to get it. I haven't noticed any technical problems.
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« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2025 @696.06 »

Your clock is really good, the information blurb at the top-left is helpful if someone hasn't heard of Swatch time before, and the whole page looks concise and easy to read with links to your main page if people are interested in exploring that.

My website is https://gizmoswebsite.neocities.org/. I've been working on it for the past few months, but I only put it online tonight. It's sort of an anonymous journal-blog where I post whatever is on my mind as well as reviews of media I've been consuming.


I love bare-bones websites, though I still found a few things to nitpick (I also love criticizing things):

  • I don't know if that was what you were going for given the old-school design, but I would drop the deprecated <font> and <center> tags for CSS (Neocities pages won't load on ancient browsers anyways because of its https connection).
  • How about setting a max-width of 80ch or so for your posts so that individual lines don't get stretched out on large/ultra-widescreen monitors.
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« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2025 @830.82 »

https://abslimeware.neocities.org

I really like the computer theme and a lot of the effects you use (eg: how the site loads line-by-line). It's clear that you put a ton of time and effort into the site, and everything is fairly easy to navigate. The blue bars on top of your sections clash with the rest of the design in my opinion though, and the bottom half of the scrolling text on the top left was cut off for me (I'm on FireFox, so it may be a browser compatibility issue).

I love bare-bones websites, though I still found a few things to nitpick (I also love criticizing things):

  • I don't know if that was what you were going for given the old-school design, but I would drop the deprecated <font> and <center> tags for CSS (Neocities pages won't load on ancient browsers anyways because of its https connection).
  • How about setting a max-width of 80ch or so for your posts so that individual lines don't get stretched out on large/ultra-widescreen monitors.

Thank you for the feedback! I'll make sure to set the max-width property, tbh I hadn't thought about what it would look like on an ultra-widescreen monitor. As for the <font> and <center> tags, they aren't there for retro purposes, I barely knew any HTML when I started creating the site and relying on them was easier than dealing with CSS. Eventually I implemented divs into the regular posts since I didn't want to go through 15+ pages whenever I wanted to make a small tweak, but the main pages have remained static so I never got around to fixing them (the directory pages are mostly just copy / pastes of each other). I'm hoping to rewrite them in the near future to be more sustainable though because I feel a lot more comfortable with CSS than I did a few months ago.
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